Tuesday, 11 April 2017

The Slug - NaPoWriMo Day 11

The slug

There is something out there
Deep in the garden
It eats my plants
Destroys my lettuce
The Coriander a goner
Silver trails the only clue

What can be done?

I know not
What it is or
Where it hides
looked under rocks
Searched in the grass
Then I found it
Snuggled in the damp
Mud below a log

What can be done?

Poisoned pellets, too dangerous
Might get the dog
Traps safe. Maybe
But a waste of beer
Copper tape on pots
Or Live and let live

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The Bop. The invention of poet Afaa Michael Weaver, the Bop is a kind of combination sonnet + song. Like a Shakespearean sonnet, it introduces, discusses, and then solves (or fails to solve) a problem. Like a song, it relies on refrains and repetition. In the basic Bop poem, a six-line stanza introduces the problem, and is followed by a one-line refrain. The next, eight-line stanza discusses and develops the problem, and is again followed by the one-line refrain. Then, another six-line stanza resolves or concludes the problem, and is again followed by the refrain.


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I hope you enjoyed this piece, I look forward to reading your thoughts (but please be nice).

Thank you

Caroline